Conclusion about sound

Watching the final piece I was satisfied to have been successful in communicating the idea of fast and addictive. From the feedback I received I note that the sound layering was very helpful and promoted the main idea of my video. I will probably replace my last "quote" ("all pencils down") with the sound of the pencil falling on a desk (it adds more of a surprise and of an end). If I judge that it needs something more in terms of an effect I will add one more "surprise" point.